OOC comments on IC stories

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Re: OOC comments on IC stories

#131 Post by Sehlanna » Tue Dec 10, 2019 3:57 am

A beautiful entry, Ana ❤️

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Re: OOC comments on IC stories

#132 Post by Fioliea » Tue Dec 10, 2019 9:47 am

Oh, Ana. Now I am crying again :) <3

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Re: OOC comments on IC stories

#133 Post by Anadelonbrin » Tue Dec 10, 2019 11:05 am

Thank you! :heart: I'm glad you like it.

The Glove story is the best advent calendar ever!

Eileena's diary is so very human. There's such a huge possibility for character development.

I love reading about Mirna's ice issue. It's so much like Ana's thorns. I'd love to find a hook into that IC to get the two of them talking!

It's great with Fio's diary to see a side of her that doesn't show ingame. All those things she would not say.

Philias' fatherly relationship with Syrawenn is another of those things that I haven't seen IC other than as little hints, but I love reading about. Though every time I see a new post there, I feel guilty for how Ana really stepped in it when she unwittingly made that joke about Philias' ex. ^_^;

There's so many great stories going on here. It's awesome! :heart:

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Re: OOC comments on IC stories

#134 Post by Philias » Tue Dec 10, 2019 12:47 pm

Jokes happen, and you just shake them off. As did Phil :)
He knows Ana meant no harm whatsoever.
And quite honestly, after the whole rosebush-happenings with Audra, he is MORE than over it. Ana is his hero! Wait until she gets her winterveil gift haha

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Re: OOC comments on IC stories

#135 Post by Sehlanna » Fri Dec 13, 2019 4:03 am

What an honour to have Gwynni appear in the glove story! And the nobleman's name! Of course! Looking forward with excitement to see how Stoen saves Winter Veil!

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Re: OOC comments on IC stories

#136 Post by Chit » Tue Dec 31, 2019 8:28 pm

I experimented a little with Chit's Winterveil story. By writing in good English rather than Chit's ungrammatical Goldshire style, I hope it would show a truer picture of who she is, under the dyslexia and poverty, as she thinks about Winterveil.

And Verne - I'm not sure, remembering Chit of 10 years ago, that Verne quite realises what he has done in telling Chit the story of Wuwu...

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Re: OOC comments on IC stories

#137 Post by Chit » Thu Jan 09, 2020 3:46 pm

Poor Rey. She's describing so well the process of being socialised so that you don't break other people in your singleminded independence. Haven't we all felt like she describes at times...

Her inner monologue makes me think of how people might feel trying to become a 'good corporate citizen' in a big corporate working in a cubicle. I never did that thank goodness. I worked in a small organisation and then mainly for myself or leading small businesses.

Rey, I wonder if your character is based on some of the kids you have to manage? She combines strongwilled conviction that she knows best, with an almost ADHD butterfly-mindedness that makes it really hard to hold her attention or explain why there is a bigger perspective she needs to take into account, or keep her in a situation where she is not fully engaged. It feels like she doesn't hear what you say, if you don't agree with her.

Not quite sure how to influence her at all.
I'd like to help her channel that energy, but it's a puzzle to me!

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Re: OOC comments on IC stories

#138 Post by Anadelonbrin » Thu Jan 09, 2020 9:10 pm

Oh Mirna... :heart: :heart: :heart:

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Re: OOC comments on IC stories

#139 Post by Syrawenn » Sun Jan 12, 2020 9:24 am

Conwal, you make me a happy camper! When we first met up and you told me about Lakeshire, I giggled as a player and freaked out as Syrawenn :) Without knowing at that first meet you played right into a part of Starlight history. SO glad you took that into the diary!
Can't wait to read more :) Also kinda hoping that at some point we'll read more about his history in the Plaguelands. Your style is pleasant and very vivid. Makes me curious for more!

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Re: OOC comments on IC stories

#140 Post by Nëm » Sun Jan 12, 2020 7:28 pm

Thank you Syrawenn! :) I will definitely write more one of these days.

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