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Re: OOC comments on IC stories

by Syrawenn » Sun Mar 29, 2020 11:54 pm

Anom: ""Pagmir, why must we always end up running from something...."
Made me laugh :) I am very happy you are continuing the story. It's really entertaining on many levels. Your choice of wording and phrasing has that typical children's book feel to it. That lovingly...I dunno...clear, concise way of saying stuff that might be perceived as dry humor. You got that style down to an artform!

Re: OOC comments on IC stories

by Syrawenn » Tue Mar 03, 2020 9:09 am

Gotta note it down here too...
Anomen, how lively the pieces you write, how very real with the ups and downs. And you are still making me more curious about what actually transpired, damn you! But seriously: I love how real you describe the goings on with Ejlah and Sienna.

Conwal, exciting piece with the introduction of Reinwald and the continued struggle of Con himself. I abolutely adore the last sentence: 'Its powers do not depend on whethet you believe in it or not....the light, young man, the light.' It gives me an immediate feel for the differences between thesd two characters. I can't wait to meet this paladin, although I may just leave my warlock out of it, heh.

Anadelonbrin, on connecting, reconnecting, freedom and how love can cage someone. That talk we had was already so strong, so supportive in its devastating revelations. This post throws an extra layer on now that she understands Eileena's point of view from all those years back. History matters and you weave it so well into all this development.

Philias, your posts keep drawing me in. They are so warm, so heartfelt and because of this I shiver at the implications, feeling like I just read a cliffhanger and wishing I had waited for the next part to be up before reading this one!

Also Ruby...our tiny mage. I am already a fan of how she views the world and her own part in it. For the life of me I do not understand how easily a new name can come to life, a whole unwritten, unplayed but implied history that works because it is not highlighted, not brought to specific attention, but just..touched upon. As if she has been there all along. It works!

Irenya, how Eileena recognizes your feeling! So much has changed, so few remain. It is damn hard reconnecting. Funnily enough it almost seems easier sometimes to connect to the new faces. I wonder how Irenya is going to walk this path. Very glad to see her back!

Brianshaw, that serious bewildered tone, haha! How can I not love it when I actually have a part in it? I love how you are way more clear than Syra's ramblings but still do not spoil any possible ic bits for people wanting to play it. A fine line, but you manage.

Elb, I can't help but feel a bit melancholic when reading his diary. There is a lot of happy bubbles, a lot of his views on social encounters which I love reading. Yet there is so often that undertone of insecurity. I am truly curious how he will continue to grow.

Rey, ohhhh how lovingly clear are your entrances! Yes there is definitely a lot to be said for the clarity with which you note down her thoughts on people and situations. I love how you are not afraid to show what she thinks, even if you as a player might know the situation is different from what she believes. True ooc/ic seperation while showing so much development! Yes, I enjoy being mentioned. Being honest there. I love that I get to play a part in her life because it is always moving, always going. Ups and downs. Highs and lows. Brutally honest!

Okay shutting up now 😁

Re: OOC comments on IC stories

by Nëm » Wed Jan 29, 2020 11:22 pm

Oh Philias, heartwarming and heartwreching at the same time!

Re: OOC comments on IC stories

by Philias » Wed Jan 29, 2020 1:29 am

I absolutely adore the slice of life entry from Preston. So valid haha.
And poor Lumi... Alwys those dreams...

Syra though... Ringthingies haha.

Re: OOC comments on IC stories

by Syrawenn » Mon Jan 27, 2020 6:37 am

Ooooo Conwal! The intricacies of his choices! That inner thinking!
Damn, I can't wait to find out where this goes :)

And Philias...big big change in the diary setup!

Re: OOC comments on IC stories

by Nëm » Sun Jan 26, 2020 10:17 pm

I just wanted to say that I've really enjoyed reading your stories and diaries! Please do keep them coming.

Re: OOC comments on IC stories

by Syrawenn » Wed Jan 22, 2020 7:20 am

Oh boy, Conwal...it ain't easy for him. Damned if he does, damned if he doesn't...SO hoping he will find a way through it all! And so hoping he'll find out he doesn't have to do it on his own...

Re: OOC comments on IC stories

by Philias » Wed Jan 22, 2020 1:18 am

Oh gosh conwal....
Sweet sweet baby!
I can't wait to see that character growth happen.
What a sweet boy!

The fact that he is scared of the outcome if he ever dares ti stand up is so inspiring and devastating at the same time!
But he will get there♥

Re: OOC comments on IC stories

by Sindarosiel » Tue Jan 21, 2020 8:08 pm

All I can say is that I enjoyed all the writings from the past few days!
Can't wait to read more!

Sure, it's like reading mini stories on everyone. I may be clueless or perhaps not so involved in rp at the moment, but I still love reading the journals.

Re: OOC comments on IC stories

by Syrawenn » Sun Jan 19, 2020 9:51 am

Yeah, again, Philias...BLOODY HELL!
Your latest is so strong. that one sentence at the end....Wow. How his love for Ellbry now urges him to find other solutions, how that feeling is SO sure within him that he is willing to take other paths....

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